The poem ‘’Island Man’’ was written by
Grace Nichols in the 1970s. The poem is about a Caribbean man that loves his
country and would like to go back, but he lives in London and he doesn’t like
it at all. Grace Nichols explores different themes that are evident inside this
poem. The main theme in this poem is home. I think this is because everything
this man talks about is going back to his beloved land in the Caribbean, but he
can’t maybe because of his job in London. The way Nichols describes how he feels
when he dreams about the Caribbean has a lot of power and also imagery. And the Island Man wakes up / To the sound
of blue surf / In his head / The steady breaking and wombing. In this quote
we can see how she uses blue and surf in one context. Blue is because of the
color of the sea and surf because of the sport. Also, surf may refer to how the
people are in the Caribbean, warm and familiar and that is why she compares
something beautiful as surf to the people.
Something unique and inspirational about this
poem is the imagery. Grace Nichols uses a lot of imagery for us to picture the
island and London. There is also contrast between the description of the island
and the description of London. Wild
seabirds / And fishermen pulling out to sea / The sun surfacing defiantly. We
can see that she uses nature to describe her land. I think this is powerful
because nature is very beautiful and she wants to transmit that she sees her
country the same way she sees a landscape. Again she uses surfing as part of
her description, and now we can infer that she loves surfing and the sea and
how the sun is so bright and big. On the other hand, she describes London as a grey of metallic soar / to surge of wheel
/ To dull North Circular roar. We can actually see that here is a contrast
because now she talks of London as a negative place to live. This is evident
because she refers to the wheels of the cars and the noise of the traffic
everyday. For a person that comes from an ambient that is very soft and smooth
to live and then have to live in a place where there is traffic and noise can
be seen much more horrible than a city person.
The language in this poem is very easy to
understand but it also has some parts that might be referring to sounds that
are linked to sounds in the island. Groggily
groggily might be an example of a sound that can come from the island. She
uses sensory language because she can transmit that the man from the poem uses
the five senses when he remembers the Caribbean islands. The imagery for vision
is almost anywhere in the poem maybe with the seabirds or the brightness of the
sun. When Nichols refers to his small
emerald island can be vision because of the nice green of the stone of also
touch of certain things such as sand that are present in a beach. With all the
description on cars in London can be smog a smell that comes form the city and
is very unpleasant to her.
As we see, in this poem the main
‘’conflict’’ is this juxtaposition between the Caribbean Island, that to her
are beautiful, and London, that is very ugly. This can be an example of
juxtaposition because of the way she thinks about these two places.
Alliteration is present in this poem in the lines To surge of wheels / To dull North Circular roar. This is the only
example present of alliteration in this poem because these are the only two
lines that start with the same letter. The rhythm of the poem is regular; this
means that there are about 6 words by line and around 4 lines by stanza. The
rhythm is also constant and remains almost the same throughout the whole poem.
There is no rhyme in this poem but because of the rhythm we can actually see
that it is not needed.
Enjambment in this poem can be evident when
you read a line and you immediately pass to the next one without stop. This might
be created because the two lines have to be together in order to make sense and
have a much bigger impact on the reader.
In my opinion, the contrast created between
these two very different places might be supported be the fact that although
the are different, he has to cope with is and continue living in London even
though he doesn’t like it. We can see this at the last line that says Another London day without a full stop. This
might be telling us that a common day with noise and bad weather will be going
on forever.
Well done for integrating quotes smoothly e.g. ‘On the other hand, she describes London as a grey of metallic soar / to surge of wheel / To dull North Circular roar.’ Don’t use italics though – use quote marks.
ResponderEliminar‘Groggily’ isn’t a sound – it’s an adverb describing an action
Sometimes your language isn’t clear e.g. ‘When Nichols refers to his small emerald island can be vision because of the nice green of the stone of also touch of certain things such as sand that are present in a beach.’
Remember to talk about the effects of literary devices on the reader. You talk about enjambment for example, but don’t explain the effect of it. Perhaps you could say that it shows that his life in London drags on and on…